early spring
on the hospital table
paper flowers
wczesna wiosna
na szpitalnym stoliku
kwiaty z papieru
ранняя весна
на больничном столе
бумажные цветы
(transl. Nikolay Grankin)
ранняя весна
на больничном столе
бумажные цветы
(transl. Nikolay Grankin)
Comment by the judge Ron Moss:
This is an intriguing haiku that brings thoughts and feelings of our own individual experiences of birth, death and everything in-between. The imagery is handled with a light touch and the obvious seasonal connection helps to bring a natural setting against what could be the stark, cold white setting of a hospital. We can feel uplifted by the splashes colour and the promise of renewal and hope.
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