Christmas Eve . . .
a gift in my arms
quietly meows
Wigilia...
prezent w moich ramionach
cichutko miauczy
My poem made its debut and was awarded 3rd place, Ex æquo with Brendon Kent in the 118 Caribbean Kigo Christmas Kukai 2017. Theme of this issue is a "gift".
VOTES: 421*** SCORE: 11
COMMENTS: A living, breathing gift! Being used to inanimate gifts, reading this haiku felt like opening a gift in itself; nice surprise in the last line
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