early spring / wczesna wiosna

early spring
on the hospital table
paper flowers

wczesna wiosna
na szpitalnym stoliku
kwiaty z papieru

ранняя весна
на больничном столе
бумажные цветы
(transl. Nikolay Grankin)

Comment by the judge Ron Moss
This is an intriguing haiku that brings thoughts and feelings of our own individual experiences of birth, death and everything in-between. The imagery is handled with a light touch and the obvious seasonal connection helps to bring a natural setting against what could be the stark, cold white setting of a hospital. We can feel uplifted by the splashes colour and the promise of renewal and hope.

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